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novelty of red shoes |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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being one's book has it's difficulty the warm words from those humble pages that one should feel safe in reciting even when their mouth was full of water or the smooth corners of that leather that one would allow her fingers to contemplate on cautious evenings when the fireplace and windows were her only lovers but in depth discussions in her mind would shoe tie the saliva of her soul boot's fear with the time to watch those tomorrows from the other side of a man's skin when he was the sundial of sinning and her love needed string less bows just to lean on like handled shovels while she supervised his counseling ________________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (02-03-2006 09:00 AM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"that one should feel safe in reciting even when their mouth was full of water" *nodding* oh how you speak...  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know the leather of this bind... And I have always loved old books... thank you for this. . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanx gurls for the morning touch..suzziec and sunfun, you two make my metal shimmer |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
I love the way you use simple words to create a materpiece of a picture. Excellent!!! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you allow the reader to feel as if they've been nurished with complete honestly which comes from those who have a passion for life. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms DS, thanks to you for the review _____________ lady lee j you always make me feel warm, thank you |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Splendid penned, enjoyed the read very much Charisma |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks lady C..I appreciate you |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"discussions in her mind would shoe tie the saliva of her soul boot's fear with the time to watch those tomorrows" Goose bumps Stranger. Powerful! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady...thank you ...and the goosegoodies look great on you.. |
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oakgrove Junior Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 12 |
write me a book please the placement of your words could make me dream in such wondrous colors |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend oak..let the writing begin,,just one book? (pout) thanks for the review |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I used to own a pair of Red leather boots. I had to give them to a friend because they hurt me, yet still...I want red shoes because of Sting and the dancing blues, ya know? Enjoyed the thoughts your poem left me...thank you!  |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
wow thought that this poem was really good, you ar really clever with the words that you use, they are so simple but they have so mych depth to them  a piece of art leanne x |
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