Open Poetry #37 |
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Water scene.........Tanka |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages ![]() |
wrinkled water scene causes by some rain droplets how surface splashes underlying flow disturbs fisherman boat rocks gently |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
wrinkled water scene caused by rain droplets surface splashes underlying flow disturbs fisherman boat rocks gently .......................... Good |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a tranquil scene you painted! Your descriptive words transported me into it! It was exceptionally appealing to my senses! It is so good to be reading your poetry again. Charismatic One! ![]() Warm hug, Linda |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Charisma....what a lovely and peaceful feeling there is to this! ![]() |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Exquisite Charisma. |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Another poet that reminds me of chinese poetry |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Well done!! loved that first line! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
very tranquil ![]() ~hugs~ ![]() Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (does happy fairy lake ballet skip) This is sooooooooo beautiful, dearest friend, I've missed you soooooooooo much and am sooooooo happy you're sharing some new poetry with us all, yay, this is soooooo beautifully tranquil and breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Theresia, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Thank you, Chairsma |
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