Open Poetry #37 |
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Brief Flickers (tanka) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989![]() |
I live life slowly A treasure, each moment spent, Time passes swiftly With age I have come to know Life’s light flickers brief through time. {choka if you wanna... ![]() seek the flame within yourself and let your soul be cleansed by the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yer so cute my friend flicka? groan... ![]() But yes, yes, that past seems to be flickers, even tho the future seems to offer no fast forward, and some days life is like a freeze frame. ![]() Enjoyed. ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
As I get older and hopefully wiser, I finally get it, life really is too short. (and all this time I thought it was a cliche) The treasures you write of are precious and few, and something no one can take away. I'm counting my blessings right about now! Enjoyed Donna~ |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
There are some wise words here..and a good poem too..thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very wise indeed... and yes, life is so short. Heart hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Lovely! - Owl |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Delightful! I enjoyed. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
loved this - well penned. ~hugs~ ![]() Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
So true, Donna. I realize this more and more the older I get. Hugs, Ethel |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Slow or fast...I prefer FULL!!! Thank you for your insights. INclan |
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latteaddict213![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
Enjoyed xoxo |
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