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Open Poetry #37

Vergissmeinnicht

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2006-02-02 05:42 PM

On some dates
It gets dark
Early

Dinner
Across the table

An empty chair

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2006-02-02 05:46 PM

This I like very much.

Charisma

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2006-02-02 10:05 PM

wow..

I loved this alot John.

-Juju

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The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-02-02 10:26 PM

Elegant and lovely.

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

4 posted 2006-02-03 06:42 PM

You never seem to amaze me

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

5 posted 2006-02-03 07:20 PM

Is that because you left before the meal arrived or he left you terrible how it gets dark too early

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2006-02-04 01:38 AM

Solstice.....hope for the solstice, then it all turns.

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steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

7 posted 2006-02-05 04:37 PM

I love your work...especially the relationship of your titles to your work and this one is exquisite...bravo!!!

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

8 posted 2007-04-23 02:05 PM

my. i talked about the same empty chair. How wonderful is your piece..while mine is better.
ha.

enjoyed

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