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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Even now Though leafless branches The rustle of summer leaves If one listens It is the past calling A woman hoping that memory Will still recall Secret rendezvous’ Moonlit strolls By a rhythmic sea And that somehow For her as well Winter Can turn to Spring |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
John~ 'If one listens It is the past calling A woman hoping that memory Will still recall Secret rendezvous’ Moonlit strolls' I find this penning to be 'instrumental' ... to the realize of that Spring WILL come again to the heart of a woman~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Simply lovely John. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I hope you aren't insulted if I say... you speak my heart with these words... please let them be heard. *S* Beautiful work!!! |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
I'm beginning to like your poetry too much |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
feeling the sombre lyric of your pen friend poet |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful, I Love it!! Charisma |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Seasons of change. Just have to go... ...outside. CG |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
LOvely and wonderful like always john. -Juju -<>-~-<>-~-<>- |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Juju, You surprise me . . . John |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful. |
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