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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it was from another town time a drama queen in her daydream with her same age john wearing the lies she gave him for his handfuls of christmas their castle had cardboard walls and cellophane windows I knew the smell of them wet paper on a warm afternoons when they did their things animal she still circles now and then in her black dress hem less praying to the impaler for punishment for her sins since the only ache she ever knew was draped over her throne backwards til it dangled from his shoulders like a harpy's pale mantle and her french speak was broken learned in school like poetry that had been ridden without wheels _______________ daark |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
Moving this back up to the top so more people can be awed by it. The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
most humble thanks ms rainbow |
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oakgrove Junior Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 12 |
be still my little heart what a lovely yarn you spin |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The outside discourse of your inward voice lessons leave a lot to the imagination, Sir. But I imagine the harpy is a happy bird tonight. Well done. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
How did I miss this? It truly is awesome. I like your voice Stranger. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
oakgrove, thank you for the walk by smile..you bless me. ________________ ms sun, you always smile me with those see thru my pen observations ________________ ms lady..so pleased you came back by, thank you |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
You made me feel for her...  You always make me feel."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
suzzieC...thanx for letting me make you, you smile me |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
always interesting My spirit will rise |
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