Open Poetry #37 |
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Third and last - development on gentle |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
As a wind gently slowing twisting you drew across my hand softly ruffling hairs on the back of my hand as you passed in a breath of wind touching a breath as you never turned leaving vapours entire in a fragment of philosphy woven On a rainbow colours transformed a need to not understand but to consider so much magic Dave |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
"As a wind gently slowing twisting you drew across my hand......" and so this lingering simplicity of thoughts deep take flight.. aye, he paused to read and read again praises to the feel of your pen friend poet |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dave....beautiful flow to this...like magic! |
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jinx26 Junior Member
since 2005-12-12
Posts 38Jersey |
I love to read your words they always keep me thinking jinx |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Lovely. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
For anyone getting my comments - 2 1/2 hour drive and I haven't eaten yet but 23.40 in the UK and I am saying this because I am watching my spelling disintegrete or grate, or whatever Dave I know I can edit these words but whatever if it is there (not looking for compliments) means I read it and want to write some more but fresh with only the idea in my mind Your words and appreciation are always valued - otherwise it is a dark hole Thanks to everyone who mails I am getting organised away and will reply. Dave |
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your words are always interesting ![]() and a pleasure to read~ My spirit will rise |
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