Open Poetry #37 |
Guilty, gloating, giggles. |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
Drunken children dancing like they should Give a 5 year old 5 shots of vodka, they'd act no different. Drink to drain the memories? or to bring them back. I said some things last night, but I wish you could have said more I wish it brought freedom. I'm hungover, I like it. I want to run into someone from the party and giggle, giggle guilty giggles gloating giggles saying to life "I did it anyways." So this is our form of murder this is how we deal with life it's the animal in us that thrives on guilt Human instinct is human instinct is animal instinct The biggest denial of them all to think there's a difference guilty gloating giggles |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
WOW, Chelsea....just wow |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Reminds me of them movies when the girl says to her friend did you sleep with him and she says sure i did and then the another says what was it like and she giggles |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
I want to run into someone from the party and giggle, giggle guilty giggles gloating giggles saying to life "I did it anyways." I loved those lines, and that sentiment Chelsea. Fantastic poem!! The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
From your older posts there is a significant difference, but that is to be expected right? They become more pesimestic and cynical, in my opinion. Not to mean it offensively I just think that somewhere along the line of the older posts to this one there was a bit of giving up. It is supurb writing still though, I agree that in a sence we are killing ourselves by the way we act in socity today. So this is our form of murder this is how we deal with life it's the animal in us that thrives on guilt But that is human life for you, always distancing ourselves from the nature of things to define humanity. But all along the further we go the closer we become to our 'animal instincts'. The cynic knows that all people enjoy pleasure and repel pain. |
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