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Open Poetry #37

This Life En-Titled

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-05-07 08:33 AM

This Life En-Titled

Letting go of distance,
the melody of lies.
May flowers to adorn me,
whispering of blue skies.

Breaths of air, illusions false
standards broken down.
The other side is coming back
desperate to be found.

There's no peace in timepiece,
no songs of loving heard.
Just longings from a "last of" kiss
and silence, not a word.

Mist surrenders to my want
when waitings just a voice
of under standing between the lines
that reign becomes my choice.

A melody of painted sounds
when empty fills the air.
A mind at ease, of tender need,
a planting here and there.

Listening, but not, intent
now dressed in turquoise, black.
Erasing sadness, moments lost,
by filling in the lack.

Here's to every Day of Sun
and even those that rain,
contradicting feelings felt:
this life where I remain.

M
( some days I am inspired by reading titles here and there)
"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2006-05-07 09:07 AM

Maureen,
A delightful read this morning.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2006-05-07 05:35 PM

Thank you Sy, I was in a rhyming mood this morning

Liz Sinclair
Member

since 2006-05-06

Posts 93
Atlantis

3 posted 2006-05-07 11:24 PM

Well, I thoroughly enjoyed this charming piece. You nailed the rhythm! This piece drips off the tongue beautifully. Thanks for sharing.

~Liz...Carpe Diem

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

4 posted 2006-05-08 12:12 PM

Talent is always nice to read

Dave

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2006-05-08 04:31 PM

Thank you Liz and welcome~~

Dave your responses are always welcome.
Thank you
M

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