Open Poetry #37 |
Dream Repair |
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
~~~~~ torn and tattered yesterday's dreams drape themselves wearily over Hope's closet door desperately in need of the healing stitchery that can only be administered by Life's expert tailor - Faith ~~~~~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
AMEN!!!! Wonderful |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now this poem actually was written for someone in here, and I am sending it to her right now - Hope, here it comes Nicely done Chrislane. Carpe' Diem |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
i ike you intertwined faith and hope |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
How'd you know I didn't have a door on my closet? Faith. Sometimes I forget about that part. yer lovely Chrislane... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou dear poets. We all need a little faith now and then. Hugs! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Chris...well said! ~Hugs, love and miss ya, Teed~ In the midst of winter, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
The images in this this write are brilliant, vivid and most of all soothing. Wonderful poem. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Nancy Lee - miss you too! Hugs! Kethry - thankyou for you kind comments. hugs! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Chris such a beautiful , touching caring thought , this was special indeed and just what I need Hugs Hope |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I am so glad that you liked this Hope. Thankyou and big hugs !! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Chris, can I just tell you how much I love this one!!!! I LOVE THIS ONE!!! Saving it. ....jo |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
awwww....thankyou jo !! Big hugs to you !! |
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ManOfWolves28 Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 83 |
My dreams could use some repair work. I like this one. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
AMEN, and now if we can just remember this when the swamp is filled with alligators and someone just pulled the plug out of the bottom!!! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou ManofWolves, glad you enjoyed. Magnus...lol...thankyou my friend. hugs! |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
A VERY NICE WRITE, RIGHT ON CHRIS.....PAUL shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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Anne Shiever Junior Member
since 2006-01-10
Posts 21KS/USA |
After the day I had, it was nice to read something peaceful and positive. Thanks so much for posting this piece. I really do love how good it made me feel tonight. Anne Shiever |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Paul & Anne - thankyou both so much. Hugs! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Nice work... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thanks & Hugs James & Lady !! |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
This is absolutely divine. A wonderful piece and I love the title. It is a little well wish for all. Brilliant! Just thought I'd let you know how much I enjoyed it. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
How nice of you EvoV2 ! Thankyou so much. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Chris, I love the message and the skill with which you sent it! Very clever. Very pretty and a pleasure to read! cathy |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Cathy, I appreciate your comments. |
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