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Open Poetry #37

Parking Lot

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2006-01-10 10:55 AM

To see
By a glance
Your life
Would have been different

To feel it
Rush through memories
As never were

To watch a sun
That might have been
Set at dusk on a neighborhood

A picnic table
Under the shadows

Toys
A children’s swing
In the yard

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2006-01-10 11:36 AM

Huan Yi
Each blink is a wink. Enjoyed

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

2 posted 2006-01-10 12:51 PM

Great job

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2006-01-10 12:54 PM

John, why does this write make me feel sad?
Your writings always bring wonderment.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2006-01-11 01:02 AM

How wistful the feel of this one! Well done in creating that mood.

...jo

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-04-23 12:25 PM

life is beautiful and your poem made it even better.

love to read this one.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-10-28 03:50 PM

enjoyed '

ARCTIC WIND

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