Open Poetry #37 |
Serenity Blues |
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I wake every morning with the blues on my breath strange days not like before I believe to my soul Sweet Serenity is moanin’ the blues to me in my dreams making me a gift I can’t put down they ride me like a witch hum me under their breath walk me where I would not go haunt my every covenant yet at night I lay up in the bed and wait for their sweet return [This message has been edited by The Lady (01-30-2006 11:44 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nice write! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent!! Enjoyed! Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
I love this!!! Great Job! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you ladies. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I like this one too. Excellent!!!!!!!!!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Y'playing my song Lady? *battin' lashes* smiling wide and oh if you are taking requests? serenity needs prayers this weekend--there's a very special favor I request of the powers that be. Love this, and I love your work. Even if it ain't for me, I'm gonna let my ego grab it. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Love this, Kate, as I do all of your poems. They are all so different, but all have your signature on them, a signature of excellence! - Owl |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I agree - all of your work is first class, and you sure have a style of your own. I am glad Karen grabbed this already as I was about to take it for her. When you get time here is why /main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayarchive&number=79&topic=000607 |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you WindWalker! Yes serenity… the song is for you… inspired by you. You’ve got my prayers… sorry I’m late. Thank you for your lovely words Diana. You too inspire me. Mysteria thank you for your encouragement and the link. |
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