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Open Poetry #37

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

0 posted 2006-01-30 12:59 PM

We walk wet sand
footprints of
the future trail us

we turn quickly
to find
only silk gray fog

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2006-01-30 06:17 AM

hmmmm sounds like Huan Yi

excellent

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

Georgiegirl
New Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 8

2 posted 2006-01-30 06:34 AM

A lot said!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-01-30 05:45 PM

Thank you both very much.

You think it sounds like Huan Yi, Dark Angel? I hope it sounds like him. I admire his writing so much. You're right.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2006-01-30 06:41 PM

I would have guessed John also. Well done!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2006-01-30 08:32 PM

yes, 'tis our John
nicely done!

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

6 posted 2006-01-30 09:41 PM

Great Job...It is Definitely John yet it still shows a bit of you in it

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2006-01-30 11:20 PM

Thank you Martie, Midnitesun and Dominique. I'm pleased it sounds like John.

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