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The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

0 posted 2006-01-25 04:15 PM

heart of a carnie
spirit of a southern roadhouse
laugh of a honky tonk woman
body of a dance hall girl
skin hard and tight
like it could break
whiskey voice
she rode in on the bus
looking for a heart to break
and fool that I am
I handed her mine

[This message has been edited by The Lady (01-26-2006 12:56 AM).]

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

1 posted 2006-01-25 04:19 PM

dun wi a twang
nd a violin
it sounds jus fine

John

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-01-25 11:37 PM

Thank you John.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2006-01-27 01:43 AM

Cute, I enjoyed this,

~ARH

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2006-01-27 03:13 AM

Very good!

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

5 posted 2006-01-27 06:11 AM

Hearts are meant to be broken so we know what broken is

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2006-01-27 09:41 AM

As Ricky Nelson used to sing ~ "Fools rush in where angels fear to tread."
Cute write!

Linda

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2006-01-28 10:42 PM

Thank you Romantic Heart, Jo, RedStone and Linda.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2006-01-29 10:24 AM

All too easy to do, ain't it? But hearts do regenerate in time, even though, like a crab's rebuilt claw, they're not quite what was there before, for a long long time.....

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DennisTheMenace
Member

since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

9 posted 2006-01-29 04:00 PM

She sounds like some of the girls I know, or have known, as they crush my heart. Enjoyed the poem since it didn't break anything yet touched so much.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

10 posted 2006-01-29 05:32 PM

Thanks Ratleader and Dennis.

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

11 posted 2006-01-30 10:33 PM

Powerfully Written. You capture such wonderful images

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

12 posted 2006-01-30 11:14 PM

Thank you Page.

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