Open Poetry #37 |
Heavenly Love |
Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
When the sun came to rise, My eyes open to your lovely sight, I couldn’t breathe if you left me now, Thought about this but a million times, You are like my life that I never had, Couldn’t lead it if you weren’t there, Had my mind made up when I saw you, Dressed in nothing but pretty red, Too many days I cried without finding love, Never knew it came at the right time, Flown down from heavenly worlds, Into my heart like a shooting star, So many of us give up on love too soon, I was also the one, who sang the same tune, But you have done so much for me, Without you, I can’t began to live, Many others could have been with you today, But I am glad you chose to stay with me, Till the end of your days and mine, I will take care of you even till my dying breath, You get the love and respect you deserve, In turn I ask for you not to hide your love, Share it with me today and now, And make me feel like a flying white dove. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Two rules or may be more , yes, more Love the person or dont Make them laugh and maybe they decide you are worth being with Good luck to you Dave |
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intention Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 59New Delhi, INDIA |
awesome Love me for who i m |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sounds like true love. Nice job. |
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