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Open Poetry #37
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2006-01-28 08:39 PM


Breathing in
Breathing out

Quietly silently because
She is moving
Inside the heart
© Copyright 2006 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
1 posted 2006-01-28 10:55 PM


Your poetry greatly appeals to me John. So much in so few words.

DejaEntendu
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since 2005-12-06
Posts 82
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2006-01-31 06:50 AM

this is truly great. I don't even know where to start. It's a precise feeling that is so hard to explain, yet you put it into words so greatly. well done
thank you
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2006-01-31 06:54 AM

a lovely write, John...
makes this rainy morning seem brighter

M
Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
4 posted 2006-01-31 09:05 AM


Thank you all
Sometimes I seem to do well
with the young
and the young at heart

John
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
5 posted 2007-04-23 01:55 PM

how beautifully singing the love, if she is love.


supper!!!
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