RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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2006-01-28
04:59 PM
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Run2U (part 2)
I’ve been to the lowest places, In search of a little piece of frame- I’ve made myself the lowest person to realise dreams, It’s all a Cinderella story- I’m waiting for my prince to come and place that glass slipper upon me.
But like I always told you, there’s a chance that glass slipper- could shatter into a million broken dreams and you were there to keep me safe, You said I’ll always Run2U- and I’ve waited moments before I called knowing my heart was like that glass slipper.
I took you to the sea the place I used to be alone, Now you were by my side as I shouted- the sea held my anger and let my calmness show I passed the secret onto you, Wasn’t life just a way of saying I’ve lived- but all I ever wanted was a lifetime with you but like life moments die too.
I remember we booked that train together, You were supposed to take me home- you promised you’d be back and I held on to hope you’d return, But you were never there when I needed you- and then my glass heart fell and broke upon the words I’ll always Run2U
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© Copyright
2006
Lee Hepworth
- All Rights Reserved
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jody5
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
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2006-01-28
05:09 PM
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This is a sad poem and very well done.
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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
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2006-01-28
11:18 PM
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"But you were never there when I needed you- and then my glass heart fell and broke"
Beautiful work Lee.
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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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2006-01-29
09:07 PM
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"there’s a chance that glass slipper- could shatter into a million broken dreams"
~ May her glass slipper and your heart be forever intact and never shatter.
I have Cinderella's glass slipper! Actually, I bought it as Disney World ~ and I love it! Unfortunately, it doesn't fit! I guess I'm not the princess my parents always told me I was!
A very sensitive piece of writing.
EA
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MGROVES
Member Elite
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
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2006-01-30
09:29 PM
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could feel this. nice My spirit will rise above the sea~ There will be no drowning of my soul or me~
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Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12
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2006-01-30
09:43 PM
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Strong emotions....It drags you with the story and leaves you feeling everything all at once..Good Job
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