Open Poetry #37 |
I Could Just Cry |
icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
sunlight burns my brain cheerfully as morning birds oblivion’s lost ©2006 by icebox |
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Katerie Member
since 2006-01-27
Posts 92Central New York |
Haiku- good stuff. You're talented. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hmmmmm..thinking on the oblivion M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent..love it! Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox "cheerfully as morning birds" |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
I never really could write this kinda poetry i never really thought about attempting it |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Liked the contrast! *hugs*...jo |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
I love the morning birds too. I watch them in the back yard. very nice haiku. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
What makes me think you are not a morning person? Hee hee. I am lucky because I enjoy waking up. Enjoyed your poem. - Owl |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Somedays all I need are your words. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your words, as the birds, are always a pleasure to wake up too My spirit will rise |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
My brain felt like this all of yesterday. Then my son told me to look up and see Mommy? The birds think it is Spring. *smile* |
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