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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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rainwalkers have secrets they know where the street drains are and where they dump all the overflow, which houses sit high and dry and which ones will need a giant sponge after a two inch rainfall and I walked the streets for a week no, not that way but when my car was in for repairs and the cabbies were nowhere to be found, I hit the ground with boots and umbrella and again, as I did in Colorado, California and Alaska, I became a rainwalker and now I have some secrets of my own about this small town in Oregon, but will keep these lips zipped mums are great flowers |
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Musicmaker1969
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
A very curious poem. I like it because it lead me to think about those who walk the streets - the poor homeless people of the world. There is no need for the homelessness we see everywhere. If the government people would give up just HALF of their incomes to a homelessness fund, there would be awrm blankets, protective walls, people who who help these lost souls find employement and a home. But our governmetns are too greedy and once they get in office, they become greedy and want only for themselves. Awesome poem. Sheri Adams Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hello there! I see some of the same things you see, and for what it's worth, I've also been lucky enough to meet and work with some fantastic people who constantly reach out to those in need, offering shelter from life's storms. It feels good, and I know it's the right thing to do...to reach out and help our fellow humans. Thanks for your reply! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I love this because it made me think of all the times I did walk before I drove and how much I missed walking and never again had that time to unwind with the city . . . always on the way back home. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
walking can be refreshing sometimes I do it for fun  just kidding walking helps the heart in more ways than one but it's pouring and windy tonight and I am glad I have a car again today |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I don't drive, so I know about this... and after a lifetime of looking at the smaller things, longer and in more detail, I'd prolly be dangerous now if I did. Sometimes I spot new growth in a neighbor's garden before they do.  Not a bad thing, that. Besides, the angels whisper stories to me when I walk.   loved this--love you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
enjoyed both this and you an utterly enveloping write thank you |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I love the rain and I love walking and I love walking in the rain, and I really llllllove your poem. Thank you for the refreshing walk with you. And, no, I won't try to drag Oregon's secrets out of you! - Owl |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Excellent work. You have created a mood I enjoyed. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Having just come in from a "rain walk" I can appreciate your poem. Most times I'm too busy keeping an eye on two adventurous dogs but sometimes one can feel what one doesn't see and that's great in the fields. Street walking, I know, can be somewhat different. Enjoyed your walk! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
mums are great flowers enjoyed this one, ms. rainwalker! |
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Ella Blue Junior Member
since 2006-05-26
Posts 47 |
Oh, I love this! It sets a stage, and I can almost smell the rain mixed with the car oil on the street. Thank you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ellablue, thank you for visiting this piece! I often walk even when driving is more convenient, just for the feel of it... knowing you understand. |
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