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Stresses grip
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Stresses grip |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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In the hand of stresses grip Only through the gaps I slip Pushing where there is no give With the strain where many live Giving where there’s no remorse Veering rarely off the course Giving where there is no take They’re the rules that life does make Showing visions incorrect Backing up with just neglect Rarely showing any more Than what we’ve seen the times before Living with a head so filled Visions that the wrong thoughts killed Juggled by the clown of stress Till the crash and one big mess |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very strong last verse... hoping you are well  M |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi M, I am well, just nice to get some thoughts out. It is funny finding it easier to write of sad things than of happy, I don't know what that is, it must be some type of reflection, outwardly I am always smiling as the picture, I suppose you can not always look at the picture. Many things happen each day and sometimes you just wish they were a little easier. Thank you for your thoughts, always very nice to see you reply, be well my friend and take care, try to smile on the outside and inside as well. Sincerely Rick |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
needed this today my friend...thank you |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Lee, I needed all my friends, thank you for being one. Sincerely Rick |
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