Open Poetry #37 |
A Slip of Poem |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A Slip of Poem… Unlike a fragrant Ladyslipper, A slip of poem Will not perish… It travels simply, Whether in one’s pocket, Or heart, And is reminisced easily In one’s mind. A slip of poem Brings with it Tender thoughts, And winsome wonderings It can be a gift, Or solace It can speak for One’s mind Leaving nothing to the Imagination Or tell of love Unrequited A slip of poem Can be an introduction Or a goodbye. More than a hallmark, It is knowing That one cared enough To pen the very best… And this is why I care to leave A slip of poem, for you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am so pleased that this slip of a poem did not slip by me! You wrote well of what you know well! Love & Sun Light, Linda |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Lovely little sentiments from you in this one~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie "And this is why I care to leave A slip of poem, for you." And you care more than so many. Thank you for this! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hugging you SIL, for the special sentiment in this....you're one of my heroines, you know! ...jo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is indeed lovely Karilea. *I need a hug* Love ya lady~ In the midst of winter, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I loved your "slip of a poem". Proof inded that mere slips have something to say. Love, Joyce |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
A beautiful little slip of a poem. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Your slips will last long after our children are gone form this world and their childrens children Ruth |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just simply beautiful. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A lovely poem, whether penned for one or as a happy thought for all... Speaking of lovely, I do like that picture -- it's precious, really catches your sparkle! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It travels simply, Whether in one’s pocket, Or heart, And is reminisced easily In one’s mind. To read this today is extra special... for as I was coming to work this morning, I was thinking about little verses that made such impact on my life... and are remembered decades later. *S* This is absolutely lovely, Sunshiney One! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
agreeing with all before me~~~ I like when your slips are showing M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
a beautiful slipping Kari This is a wonderful write from our sunnyladyperson... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Beautiful!!! |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
oh I do love this...such a seemingly simple sentiment, but in reality running deep and true to your heart |
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Katerie Member
since 2006-01-27
Posts 92Central New York |
The repetition was amazing. It's not often that I encounter any that works very well. The message is great- I know exactly what you're talking about. My english teacher conveys this to us through everything we do, and I thank him, just as I thank you for reminding all of us of this. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~And this is why I care to leave A slip of poem, for you.~ Just what I needed today, a slip of poem, thank you for sharing, dear caring lady. (((hugs))) Charisma |
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