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Friendship |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Reinvent the friend reconstruct the bond stretch the link apparent discomfort longing wastes away college experience dines at table for two Friend spots for another body the two year match withers what was it that held company who was the consort no reason for permanence always another star heaven has plenty shiny objects detract attention deter from constancy of contented selves. Friendship gone sour blinded by wants of contented selves of need and distrust unwilling portions shared less and less selfishness reconstructed links burst apparent discomfort to live in the present alone and friendless ghost of longings dine at tables for two. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-21-2006 09:32 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Some vivid lines here Martin. All too real for some. Well done. TD |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Martin, What insight into many lives here as you took me from the start to the end and back to the start again. apparent discomfort to live in the present Have had to lose many myself because of that very reason. You are always so truthful when you write. Something to be proud of. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thank you both for your kind words  |
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