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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2006-01-25 09:22 AM

What sound does great beauty make
As men’s eyes snap toward her and boy’s hearts break;
How can she glide in walking
And stop a room full of men from talking;
What is it?

Is it her long flowing hair
Her style
The eyes and the sparkle there
Her smile
That she does easily share,
What is it about her?

I struggled to return to my coffee
Using the morning paper to shield me
Hopefully my hands not shaking
When I her a soft foot fall
And a sound of a angel call
“Is this seat taken?”

Gloom

Just me daydreaming

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2006-01-25 09:44 AM

Oooo! What a delicious daydream!

May your dreams become your reality!

EA

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2006-01-25 09:55 AM

some days this is exactly what a girl needs.

A wonderful daydream...thank you.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2006-01-25 10:18 AM

Beauty is that
which without effort
lifts man
above his common nature

Paul Valery

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2006-01-25 10:51 AM

"It must be Cindy Crawford," serenity typed grumpily.

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2006-01-26 09:02 AM

What sound does great beauty make

I'm not sure... but know I'll never make it. *S*

However... your words do.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2006-01-27 03:29 AM

enjoyed........jo

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2006-01-28 12:00 PM

Excellent...James

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

8 posted 2006-01-28 06:43 PM

Prof,
How quick we assume it a dream! Don't despair, I believe you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2006-01-28 11:11 PM

Nice job and I believe you too!

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