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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2006-01-09 08:44 PM

There is a touch that we share
The in between of mind and body
Shimmering atop the pond of another day
And in these times, we joust in gentle ways
Hoping for a glimpse at that swollen truth
Something speaking deep down inside
The echo tells, “she loves you, she really loves you”.
And I do, from the inside out and always
Among expressions that are only us
Pulling at the sutures of a wounded yesterday
As these frail hearts we let open pour
Filled with so much hope and so much fear
For the thin skin of healing is fresh
And I hear it, breath it, drink it in
“He loves you, he really loves you”.
Baring the parts of me never seen
Never told before, so cautiously and happily
There in the after, still spellbound
The untied laces of my best shoes trip me
Into questions heavily to kneel in my own arms
And I trace the space where you just lay
To wonder of the sunrise met beneath your hand

Copyright Kkh 01/09/06

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (01-09-2006 10:49 PM).]

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2006-01-09 08:58 PM

This is really lovely.

I know that feeling...and you captured it well.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

2 posted 2006-01-09 09:41 PM

wonderful writing, full of feeling, many of us can remember this feeling

Julie

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

3 posted 2006-01-09 10:35 PM

Pulling at the sutures of a wounded yesterday

Great line

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

4 posted 2006-01-09 10:40 PM

This is great!

Kristabell

weepingwillow
Junior Member

since 2006-01-09

Posts 33
Sin City-Las Vegas

5 posted 2006-01-09 11:04 PM

Beautiful piece...

poe
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 180
Heading to China

6 posted 2006-01-10 02:22 AM

Simply Amazing

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2006-01-10 09:14 PM

To wonder of the sunrise met beneath your hand. Such a unique thought and expression.

This poem is filled with such emotion and
thought. You go.....

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2006-01-12 01:13 AM

Oh what a wonderful love song this is!!
Great write ThisDiamond!
I hope that lucky guy is aware of this…??

JL

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2006-01-13 01:27 AM

Kathleen, this is so love-filled and flows like a gentle river. Beautifully penned!

....jo

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

10 posted 2006-01-13 08:49 AM

There is a touch that we share
The in between of mind and body
Shimmering atop the pond of another day
And in these times, we joust in gentle ways
Hoping for a glimpse at that swollen truth
Something speaking deep down inside
The echo tells, “she loves you, she really loves you”.
And I do, from the inside out and always

sheessshhh, I could have highlighted the entire poem, this was an awesome read, that left me wanting more..beautiful!!!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2006-01-13 09:02 AM

Kathleen...This has to be your best!
Of course I think that about every one of yours I read..
But this oozes such tender feelings of love.
Very much enjoyed this keeper.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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