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Open Poetry #37

Wherewolf

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2006-01-24 05:12 PM

So you’ve lost some weight
And changed your hair

And now I imagine
We’re supposed to follow you
Wherever you go

But see old girl the real world
Was never like that at all

Not back then
When we were young
And even much less now

With too much known
To be taken in
Under what little is left
Of the moon

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

1 posted 2006-01-24 05:49 PM

Excellent work.

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

2 posted 2006-01-25 05:34 AM

alot has changed i wouldnt mind living in the arranged marriage era where young females got married to a certain type of man and it was just great i'm guessing

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-04-23 01:38 PM

for whatever the reason, this is so very good and make me laugh.

very good and funny. Your seriousnes does not bother me.

enjoyed.

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