Open Poetry #37 |
i dreamed the dream of you |
RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
A single memory remained it twisted in and out- the mind, like a voice calling, wakes suddenly wide eyed - wondering! Its visions of thee, And on that thought…a smile stays touched into place, yet it was made by fingertips: Brushed with the coldness of fantasy the eyes longing to close to dream again… Thou art dancing in the snow covered field, Thee promised me, to the place, And the snowflakes melted slowly, before they hit our parted lips ready to kiss; Watered passion were teardrops upon me In the room which waits for my waking, Seems my heart hath melted this dream and thee stands alone in thy winter world!.. So frail these memories, sweet thoughts, thee, As if by bitter chance – they might fail to be The ghost of thy form leaves me wondering, Concealing thee beneath the unbreakable soul. O touch me, and keep my smile warm compared to what is not the closed eyed world I’d rather die in this dream of old! And kiss upon old times spend and sold. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
lovely -juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
RedStone, I love the sincerity and sensitivity that comes alive in your writing. ~miscellanea~ So frail these memories, sweet thoughts, thee, As if by bitter chance – they might fail to be The ghost of thy form leaves me wondering, Concealing thee beneath the unbreakable soul. O touch me, and keep my smile warm compared to what is not the closed eyed world I’d rather die in this dream of old! And kiss upon old times spend and sold. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness! The delicate, tender-heartedness of this graceful poem of love, has left me breathless! An exceptionally fine write! Linda |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
O touch me, and keep my smile warm Heart felt thoughts above. I enjoyed reading this. Hugs Fee Expressions, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"And the snowflakes melted slowly, before they hit our parted lips ready to kiss" Lovely poem Lee. |
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