Open Poetry #37 |
Suck it up II (for Skyfire) |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Oh really Harry . . . Your maudlin poor me poetry Is just too much All this stuff about broken heart Tortured soul all because a girl you knew Wouldn’t come around . . . I know for sure it pleases you To walk in black and salt the wound But show respect for intellect Try hard to be a man |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Fantastic! Thank you! and then He created the horse... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I love this one too! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
YES!! Absolutley love this one John! |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Too right, John! I really gotta stop all that misery mongering. I'm done with the sackcloth and ashes. No longer picking scabs.... Lesson learned. Smiling here! The "Harry" Shenachie |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
intellect is for math Intense tears is for poem good laugh. may someday you write a poem with torrent of tears between the lines. |
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