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Open Poetry #37
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2006-01-22 08:55 AM


A gray pall among the pines
Oaks birches other leafless trees

On such a dawn
One almost expects to see

The single hunter
Quietly moving along a stream

Silent soldiers
Ranked in rows on open fields

Slowly coming through the fog
On their way to die
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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
1 posted 2006-01-23 02:53 PM


Another wonderful write John.

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-04-23 01:14 PM

We can not control our dreams but certainly we can creat all kinds of illusion with a bottle. in between, it is the true cold world that unbearable to our eyes of our souls.

cold read.
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