Open Poetry #37 |
Memoirs of an unrequited mind |
Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
I began it was slow at first and difficult I found my worth it was a crazy man and lonely I met my match It was painful and i fell I used my mind I was passed by and abused I imagined so i soared as icarus and melted I felt and was reborn as a bird I End and my life began anew I went to the desert on a horse with no name, it felt good to get out of the rain. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Makes you think Some nice understated imagery here Dave |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I LOVED this. "I met my match It was painful and i fell I used my mind I was passed by and abused" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "I End and my life began anew" fantastic! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
an enjoyable eching |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I imagined so i soared as icarus and melted I felt and was reborn as a bird I End and my life began anew" This is brilliant, poignant, thought-provoking and powerfully consise. I especially loved the above line Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Digital_Hell Member
since 2006-06-05
Posts 202Amidst black roses |
A very nice write and most enjoyable to read. I End and my life began anew that part especially, it is dark and yet hopefull. hells gate reads Abandon hope all ye that enter here |
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