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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2006-05-20 05:38 AM


Tall oak trees cling to earth
in remembrance of their birth
when the winter of this life
strips beauty from the body
and removes protective canopies
that shade our rocky roads.

And to stand in nakedness
no blessing and gift token
to the newly made aware
who reach and stretch in panic
for the cover-ups of old.

Slowly in the change
from desperation to the known
gratuities emerge to settle all the fear
but love doesn’t disappear
like leaves from tall oak trees
in the winter, cold winter,
of apparent disavowal.

Through the budding and the fall,
through the knowing and withdrawal,
love to me like sand to trees  
until seasons cannot barter
for the beauty of a soul!

Helen / 20 May 2006


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Bodger
Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2006-05-20 10:57 AM


Helen

If I took a guess at this, I would say you are writing about corruption, the withdrawal of funds and the innocent hurt yet again, by the greed of the powerful

Dave

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2006-05-20 01:30 PM


Hi, Dave - Thanks for the read.  Many elements of life are open for corruption - even love - and the greed of the powerful is simply everywhere.  We can't escape but we can decide how much and for how long we allow it to hurt.  We have children here committing terrible acts of brutality and this makes me wonder about innocence but we can only look to ourselves and our own particular choices in life.  But I write of love in the face of ... winter!

Helen

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2006-05-20 09:10 PM


Nice writing...James
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