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bens101
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0 posted 2006-05-19 02:55 AM




  Miles away
  you are a puzzle
  and I need to find the piece
  that fits just right
  so I can sleep at night.


  I can't stand it
  I need my arms around you
  to feel your skin
  the soft creamy touch
  I have grown to love.


  Waiting for your call
  it's not fair
  that I have to live like this
  and pretend you're here
  when I miss you so much.


  When we finally met
  you looked sun kissed
  and even more beautiful
  when I had last seen
  you staring at me.
  Benjamin Prins  2006

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with you
1 posted 2006-05-19 10:21 PM


*sighs*

I just love the mushy stuff

this is great...

‘I want to swim away
but don’t know how
sometimes it feels
just like I’m falling
in the ocean’
~Blue October

bubblesleave
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since 2006-03-04
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2 posted 2006-05-19 11:35 PM


I like this!
Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2006-05-20 05:08 PM


Very lovely words

quality like someone trying to understand in early days

Dave

Pauline
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Island in the Sun...
4 posted 2006-05-20 09:33 PM


ahh....

so very sweet... loved it!

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