Open Poetry #37 |
I have made love with three women who ... |
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I have made love with three women who’ve attempted suicide two, before they knew me, never after; Jane, before she loved me, and then she loved the razor in the echo of our laughter when I remember the two, I am not the shepherd and they are not the lost but when I remember Jane, my body is a nail and my bed is the cross |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Ok, you have to stop being so frieken' brilliant and talented LOL.....You're making my mediocre muse jealous over here :P This is yet again another powerful piece. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
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Honeybee, thank you for all your kind words. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nailing intensity again in so few words stark imagery |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
WOW this is so haunting Very powerful words. Debo |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Okay...It doesn't happen often but I am at a lost for words with this one! |
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