Open Poetry #37 |
On a Swing |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
On a Swing, Knees adrift the fingers of grass skirt Sending flip flops to the arms of clouds Clouds, Iris bow, bent back to pleasure That toes tickle afternoon shade Making sunshine voice upon the breeze Breeze, Adventure to the underside of grass Soft on skin still moist to tan Settling in innocence Innocence, Ascends a woman and a man To laugh, to love To be Copyright Kkh 5/19/06 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice piece of poetry from one who can bring to others a smile, a moment of calm... and so much more. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice easy poetic trip through some nice images....I enjoyed the read very much. Eric |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oops! Can somebody help me stop the swing - or perhaps I will jump off, yes that's what I will do! Wheeeeeee! Landed bent-kneed and barefoot on the grass. That was lovely! Thanks! This brought back a variety of very happy/bitter-sweet memories. - Owl |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
TD I am thinking to a degree about your words and Hopes For some reason I am starting to see quality words again Others make a lot of comments, especially when you are in the Press and your next career jerk It's good to see the words Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Love this!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you took me with you swinging on the sky |
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