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Sometimes In The Quiet
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Sometimes In The Quiet |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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Sometimes In The Quiet I don't miss you much anymore, just sometimes in the quiet, the memory of us is far too old, the bond frayed, I cannot tie it so I guess I'll be moving on much sooner than I had thought, you were a mountain I peaked long ago and on the downside, a lesson taught: once a mountain is conquered, you must then leave it behind you and move on to the next one, it won't come there to find you... it may be hard to see where you are and on the downside, you may deny it, just listen, there are things you'll hear sometimes in the quiet.  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"just listen, there are things you'll hear sometimes in the quiet." Absolutely right, Dixie! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Most Excellent Ms. Dixie. Loved the ending...took me to the picture. Well done! TD |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Wow, Dixie. great writing, and the last line..wow. Jason |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You are flying with your words Dixie. Love this! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Dixie, the words, the poem, the scenery all blend together well....a pleasure to read. |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
once a mountain is conquered, you must then leave it behind you and move on to the next one, it won't come there to find you... here is my mountain and a few words for you /pip/Forum94/HTML/003983.html a poet who cares |
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Astrogirl18 Junior Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 16Canada |
I really take interest your poetry, really good!!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
were just too busy to 'hear that quiet' that you invite in.....if only we could, would make things so much clearer |
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picturegramic Member
since 2006-05-16
Posts 112 |
Enjoyed this read and I always enjoy the quiet. When quiet speaks louder than words and we truely hear and understand than we are truely wise! Thanks for sharing, picturegramic |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dixie, this was a beautiful penning!  Linda  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is fantastic, Dixie. And, so true. When we sit in the quite, our minds tend to wonder back to the memories of the past. Mine does! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
yep, sometimes the sound of your own small voice comes through and you realize that there's something to be said from yourself that you've been avoiding and then the truth about your inner feelings sets you at ease through good and the bad. Eric |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Well done! It was nice to read. |
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