Open Poetry #37 |
one more hour please |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
o that morning smile that wipes the haze right off the newborn flower yet the spoiler of dreams that sustain the lonely through the dreaded midnight hour |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Good to see you...and read you again it is always such a pleasure...and this was well worth the wait...excellent! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love the way you revealed the dark side of both sunshine and smiles. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
extremely well written, depicting both sides, light and dark. Nice to read you again Mich. seek the flame within yourself |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
yes, interesting how you put both within and gave them power and effect. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wonderful write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Without each other, the dark and the light would be so gray. Enjoyed this! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
nice expressive split in there....Good read. Eric |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Love this - excellent portrayal of balance and duality Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Too dark for me............ |
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