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Orginal 98 - Phone Number
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Orginal 98 - Phone Number |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
The Phone Number It’s been a long day Searching for months and she said “yes” Tonights the night Didn’t sleep well First to pay me attention I can recall I want her To have a ball Met John for lunch Advice, he’s got a bunch Bought the latest smells Got strange looks from the Franchise girls Showered so much I’m red Green gel on my bed Yellow flashing on my back Guts gone home Prefers a sack Gotta go, can’t tell the boys I chickened All that noise In the cab the neon sign Said “shut his mouth”, you’re doing fine Outside The Place Of My Dreams Or short of salts place She'd stood me up Thank for anyone for that If she'd turned up When on my back A ratatatatat In glasses I slowly turned Seeing humour Slowly yearned Then she laughed And slowly turned You are sure you Want to learn I nodded Heart between my teeth This is the number No repeat That is the number that I dialed Put the one in front, she smiled I like you so forget these things Lets go and teach you how to sing Dave |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wow! what a cool beginning...ratatatat and away you went  enjoyed this much |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Midnight I wrote this for a lot of men Women 'if you will pardon the expression' think it is hard to find a soul mate. A lot men seem to be looking for a mate, and soul, can often seem an extra. Dave |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
A wonderful read Dave. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, I dated someone once many years ago who said he wanted to "save my sorry soul" but all I was willing to give was my body  I never dated him again, just told him "please leave my soul alone, it's just fine, thank you!" |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Thanks Froggy Midnight I wouldn't say that to, too many men Some of them have just got onto solid food and taking the muzzle off Unless of course Dave |
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