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Open Poetry #37
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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
0 posted 2006-05-18 12:02 PM

so many.

clawed to their impatience.
never fated beyond the obstacle
of mediocre blip.

criticizing future lines  

the arguments…  

i feed them for amusement



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Gaia
1 posted 2006-05-18 05:50 PM

LOL, gourmet chef stuff.
Good to read your insolence again.
pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
2 posted 2006-05-19 04:56 AM

thank you midnight
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