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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
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0 posted 2006-05-17 11:11 PM



Moments before
when the green arbor
rejoices in the sky

and then it comes,

whether or not
you're quite ready
to receive,

it can downright storm

or perhaps
just sprinkle over you

in a sassafron colored
rhyme,

it doesnt really matter

as for that moment

of his much sought
after kiss

you were reminded

that you are

still very much
alive.

*for the dreamlover*

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picturegramic
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since 2006-05-16
Posts 112

1 posted 2006-05-17 11:21 PM


Magical Moments!
Enjoyable read.
thanks,
picturegramic

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2 posted 2006-05-17 11:27 PM



very nicely done....much enjoyed

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