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Open Poetry #37
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PazSqual
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since 2003-11-17
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0 posted 2006-05-17 09:06 AM


Cosmic Dust

Nestled in this darkness
I walked a circle, leading nowhere
Revolving ‘round an emptiness
I had settled down with loneliness

Then like Cosmic Dust
Wandering the Universe
Without rhyme or reason
Two particles cross paths

Colliding with a force
That bonds them into one
Creating a new world
Which cannot be undone
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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2006-05-17 11:57 AM

PazSqual
Good write, enoyed.
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-05-17 01:55 PM

very powerful!
BROTHER JOHN
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since 2006-04-06
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3 posted 2006-05-17 02:15 PM

Dear PazSqual,

I love poems on creation. This one could mean your creation. Thank you.
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