Open Poetry #37 |
opposite side of night |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
opposite side of night ebony night sat down beside me like recognition & surprise of an old friend smiles flashed in the night drinking the embrace of imaginative madness chanting immeasurably a sense of well being like midnight dampness claiming the surge of excitement in this savannah night time stood lazily on quiet rivers that evening spilling baskets of luminous glows like torches pointing toward the bright colored foliage of adolescent years suspended drifting on… lengthy strides of human nature suckling on what was easy to appreciate like tomorrow’s promise sailing on some tropical breeze pushing us into voluntary moments knowing the thrill of second sight & truth like ideas personally taming confidential mysteries reflecting a doorway to life & adoration holding close consciousness compromise like sculpted muscles wondering out loud yep… we joined a romance club… that evening embraced the thoughtful mind of some spiritual conversational brilliancy… played a little music lapped a full moon, like water purring against pink island sands inspiration, outdoing itself the only sounds breaking still velvet air were falling specks of fireflies caught in the downdraft of summer night dreams sights sounds curiosity wearing us like the Great Valdez Sapphire [This message has been edited by LeeJ (05-18-2006 02:54 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ, I think you were only one dream over from me. A delightful read this morning. Top of the morning and bottom of the evening to ye. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes Sy, I was.... many thanks and wishing you the same |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Lovely LeeJ! :-) |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, yes, a beautiful write, LeeJ. A stunning write! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I so enjoy seeing through your eyes. Beautiful. TD |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Wow - this is beautiful, something to be treasured....and of course it's a keeper Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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