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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2006-05-15 12:54 PM


They look up at night,
pick a star to watch over their kin.
Far away they fight,
in a war they didnt want or begin.

All the things in their heads they'd say,
but cannot, they are apart.
To whisper, ''your'e here now, it's okay'',
to feel the glow of a loving heart.

Bring speach, bring talk, patience and care,
exercise all possible ways.
Human lives preciously spare,
let the soldiers live out their days.


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-05-15 12:59 PM



send them all home safely
let all mothers rejoice
no matter the flag they fly

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-05-15 03:55 PM


GR you have such a loving kind heart
Rainbowdust
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3 posted 2006-05-17 05:33 AM


Amen, Goldenrose.
PS. I haven't been here in a couple of months - like the new photo

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

LeeJ
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4 posted 2006-05-17 08:46 AM


wonderfully said!
The Lady
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5 posted 2006-05-17 10:57 PM



Beautifully done Goldenrose. A subject very near to my heart.

picturegramic
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6 posted 2006-05-17 11:28 PM


AMEN
bring them home safely
bring them home NOW!
pray for peace!
thanks for sharing,
picturegramic

Goldenrose
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7 posted 2006-05-18 12:14 PM


Thank you to all who have replied....

Goldenrose.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

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