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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
16 syllable poem i just wrote after experiencing some mixed feeling of sadness and counfusion..probably doesnt make sense Brain Dead....... Sometimes in life people tend to take foot on the incorrect route We set aside our conscience and ignore the voices of doubt Ending up in valleys of darkness putting us in the shadows Deep in our heart depression sets quick and hits critical sad~lows The world spins opposite to one's broken demented mental state The fragile balance of sanity starts to slowly desecrate Looking for heavens gates but finding a valley of lurid death Every sudden gasp is of failure till the very last short breath Still chasing lost goals that now exist in another far planet Heart now cold as stone, anger left it melted into hard granite Actions speak louder than words, but words cannot ever go unsaid Now a zombie in the head, memories leave one quickly brain dead |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
When memories do that, than it's certainly better not to linger on them. This is indeed a reflection of your dark moment. May you consider that our hearts and our brains are fantastic organs that renew themselves continuously ... let go and let them realign to Universal Harmony. You did a good job. Love, Margherita |
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