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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Take your visions from hair All it has to do it fall Lay it softly by the bank Like a shadow Growing small Commen 'lay down my by side' All I have for you is small It's like a bank balance A small shadow on The Wall Third posting has to be treated with respect, so all ideas have to be consdense, because I dont sit around and wait for Piptalk, no matter how I feel, but make your decisions Dave Was i Was I there where you were born, and your brother noted down before, did I have to suffer sins, never seen, nothing beging, unless I just live with it Was I some object for a woman who needed a target Shackled up in a mind Easy for the Fo get No I wasn't there Green lipstick and all Just an idiot who turned up Whilst you equalised the score On everything I worked for To give The jump Fore $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ Honesty One of my ideas stuff And I put these words Because I do actually care Rightly or Wrongly That it is a place I Post on And I appreciate the tolerance Dave ********************************************** Honesty as said “as the length of a ‘Chancellor’s foot’; well equity; actuality Describe honesty “It is meeting the law” What “is the law”? The law is what they tell us Who tells you “what the law is” They do! How do I avoid breaking the law? Well, you don’t annoy people, you ackowledged – your betters Tip your hat, or something Know your place What happens If I goe away We rejoice ( sorry was only speaking aloud) but you aren’t from these parts And we is working on something And he’ll make sure We get What we deserve “Tiger, Tiger burning bright, in the forests of the night, what immortal hand or eye could frame thy fearful “ ‘Apologies to Kip’, I’ve put reality in for the tribal decision’, vote or and pay politicians You can at least annoy the Tiger And rely on a short memory Politicians Lack the basic worth And therefore Tantrum Dave Page |
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Liz Sinclair Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 93Atlantis |
(Take your visions from hair All it has to do it fall Lay it softly by the bank Like a shadow) I'm no art critic or poetry critic for that matter, but my friend, that's one hell of a beautiful stanza. Gorgeous! Liz...Carpe Diem |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Yes, it was Dave just mind bouncing We used to call it 'Brain Storming' then we realised your brain had to be left at Reception whilst we lowered our heads I write I suppose about life, but unfortunately, real life Dave |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Good Morning Dave, Your words say it all. Enjoyed the morning this morning. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Good afternoon to you Froggy Saturday about 16.15 by my time Thanks your words. Hope things are ok Dave |
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