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Open Poetry #37

Secret Admirer

bens101
Junior Member

since 2006-05-05

Posts 32

0 posted 2006-05-14 07:11 PM

If I were to go tommorrow
you can have my life
and all that I had
because you mean so much to me
my pure lovestruck child.

I am fascinated
by the things you do
like making puppy dog eyes
moving your lips
and always smiling at me.

I am so cold right now
but it makes me warm
knowing you care
even on the coldest of days
when the pain won't seem to stop.

Please continue my work
make the world a better place
so I can be happy once again
for I am leaving you now
sincerely your secret admirer.
Benjamin Prins 2006

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2006-05-15 06:39 AM

A very touching piece.

"pure lovestruck child" ... beautiful expression. If only we could make that love and trust last forever; we would be able to move the mountains and the world would change.

... the world waits.

Love,
Margherita

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