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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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0 posted 2006-05-14 05:18 PM

Because You Are

because you are gold
in a silver storm
where I'd have been cold
I'm always warm

because you are slow
you run gentle and thick
in a world on the go
things slip away quick

because you are strong
you always hold tight
where I'd have been wrong
and not put up a fight

because you are love
in such times of hate
go on, fly above
I'll patiently wait

because you are all.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2006-05-14 05:25 PM

This is exquisite, dear Dixie, it touches the heart!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2006-05-14 05:57 PM

You write so well

You are amazing

And I originally wrote

Amaxing

I take immense pleasure

Essence

Again

Dave

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

3 posted 2006-05-14 06:04 PM

A fine poem Dixie..you are deffinately changing i think..and so much stronger and vigourous you are thank you for these words..

Goldenrose.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2006-05-14 06:32 PM

good read

BROTHER JOHN
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since 2006-04-06

Posts 386

5 posted 2006-05-14 07:58 PM

These words flow from thy depths and speak to our depths.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2006-05-14 11:43 PM

Heartfelt passing shadows. Thank you for sharing.

soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

7 posted 2006-05-15 12:13 PM

Loved this. Could hear a melody with it somehow...

"Is any song worth singing if it doesn't help?" -- Wilco, 'Wishful Thinking'

Devious Intellectual
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since 2006-05-08

Posts 112

8 posted 2006-05-15 12:18 PM

makes me think of God...like it nice and sweet...u otta write a book of ur best poetry

Debo
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since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

9 posted 2006-05-15 02:09 AM

Now this is just so true!
Love will patiently wait.
Good poem P.S.

Debo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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10 posted 2006-05-15 03:53 PM

thank you all for such lovely comments here

mostly I am posting old poems that are no longer in the archives and there are so many new people that my old ones are just like new!

It will have to do until my muse returns

sweetberry
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since 2006-03-29

Posts 125

11 posted 2006-05-24 05:06 AM

That muse of yours deserves a vacation because it's always working in overdrive on overtime!!!! Thanx so much for the lovely work!!!!

passing shadows
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12 posted 2006-05-24 12:37 PM

good to see you again sweetberry

I was wondering where you were

thank you for so many wonderful comments!

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

13 posted 2006-05-25 08:31 AM

Dear Dixie, I don't know if you are seeing angels or not, or have found a pot of gold for yourself, hold your vision my friend or the person of who you describe.
Thanks for sharing, take care and be well.

Sincerely
Rick.

linkin16
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since 2006-05-29

Posts 26
Wales,UK

14 posted 2006-05-29 03:13 PM

wow,that's amazing and really uplifting..kinda makes me sad to cus its sound like you've found something that we all search for..good work

passing shadows
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15 posted 2006-07-01 05:30 PM

thank you

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