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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Where Where water forms illusions mist And fog plays spirits phantom twists The dew is hung in necklace drape Hanging down her grace of nape I build this from a mix of wile A trace of scheme a little smile Steep it like a cup of tea A quotient full of love in me We sip it in a fantasy Amidst the green of luxury Drink the nectar of the field And bless this time of dreamers yield It is a magic bird of flight Those wishes called to stars at night Weaving lace of day light grace To make illusion real in space It’s this I give thee as a ring A ring to wear of constant spring |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
your paintbrush perpetual mining wine from the grape. good saturday to you in sunny florida !! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess And the top of the morning to you my sweet.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"It is a magic bird of flight Those wishes called to stars at night Weaving lace of day light grace To make illusion real in space It’s this I give thee as a ring A ring to wear of constant spring" Ah a ring of constant spring.. How lovely dear Seymour. Very much enjoyed today's words of wisdom. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Now you are one of the first to recieve this ring. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
How you never run out is beyond me - but I for one, am darn glad you don't! This is absolutely an ethereal, and whimsical write dear Sy. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"It is a magic bird of flight Those wishes called to stars at night Weaving lace of day light grace To make illusion real in space" and you write magic, dear Sy...time and time again.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Thank you my canadian dove.  Martie And your replies are my payment. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
What pretty pictures of your heart, Spring circles, no stop, no start! I'm thinking you've a lucky wife to have such bounty in her life.  Klassy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy, I'll pass this on to her. Thank you sweet. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'The dew is hung in necklace drape Hanging down her grace of nape' You drape words so gracefully ... full of love ... full of absolute magic~ The phrase I *lifted* made me think of my great grandmother ... thank you for that~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very pretty piece of work you've painted here Sy lucky lady she is |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
Dear Seymour, Yes, there is "something" very majestic about the night and herein is the poetic's sheer delight! Thanks for your gifts in helping us to see better in the night. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
goodness havent seen you in a while this was a real good write, and your word were so poetic, thanks for sharing, keep up the awesome poetry...Poetry can get you very far |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Each of us has a gift. BROTHER JOHN To see within the white of light Is to see within the night. Thank you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Angelheart You are an inspiration, thank you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"We sip it in a fantasy Amidst the green of luxury Drink the nectar of the field And bless this time of dreamers yield" And it's a beautiful time you've painted Sir. Indeed you are prolofic. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady I thank you dear lady. |
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