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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2006-05-13 07:51 AM

Exhileration
of the trees,

knight the blank branches
with the beading of rain

renegade blossoms
purple the gutters
as they're slipping
away

wish on the dandelion

christen the day

tambourines of
the gypsies,

guess who was blessed
when she caught
the bouquet?

a kiss so devine,
just a heavenly wink,

then she pulls up
the gate,

i offered my soul
for this moment

with no fears for tomorrow,

he lifted the veil

he loved me today!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2006-05-13 09:29 AM

inkedgoddess
He loves you every day.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2006-05-13 12:02 PM

christen the day

tambourines of
the gypsies,

guess who was blessed
when she caught
the bouquet?

I have to tell you that is my absolute favorite ever of yours! It's simply heaven!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2006-05-13 02:04 PM

InkyOne~

'wish on the dandelion'

I LOVE DANDELIONS ... and I love this penning~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-05-13 02:53 PM

"wish on the dandelion

christen the day

tambourines of
the gypsies,

guess who was blessed
when she caught
the bouquet?

a kiss so devine,
just a heavenly wink,

then she pulls up
the gate,

i offered my soul
for this moment

with no fears for tomorrow,

he lifted the veil

he loved me today!"

Oh my goodness!! I almost copied the entire piece!!!
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!
(Keeping it, I am)
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2006-05-13 05:17 PM

I don't have words
just awe

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2006-05-14 08:55 AM

quote:
i offered my soul
for this moment

with no fears for tomorrow,

he lifted the veil

he loved me today!

Love you offer and love you get.
Dixie is right, this is awesome.
Hugs.
Margherita

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