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Open Poetry #37

The End is Near

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

0 posted 2006-05-13 12:16 PM

It's easy to wonder is this the end?
And it's hard to not to care,
when they're never really there.
And, it hurts to be forgotten,
yet, it should never come as a suprise.
This silence speaks more than a million words combined.
Memories of good times aren't erased,
but often blurred with time.
Drowned out with all the negatives,
in the chaos of this beginning demise.

Fabiani
Member

since 2006-05-12

Posts 123
Mesa, Az

1 posted 2006-05-13 12:20 PM

I like it you have the same thoguhts ive had and the same darkness

bubblesleave
Member

since 2006-03-04

Posts 197
Bloomington, IN

2 posted 2006-05-13 12:33 PM

I like this!

Archea
Member

since 2006-05-13

Posts 65
United States

3 posted 2006-05-13 05:28 AM

very good, i think i felt a little bit of your life through this poem, which i assume is what your looking for. exellent poem!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2006-05-15 01:57 AM

I understand the part...when they're never really there...more than I want to...James

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2006-05-15 10:05 AM

that also might mean
a new warm beginning
could be near

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