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Open Poetry #37

Refections in Heartache

Fabiani
Member

since 2006-05-12

Posts 123
Mesa, Az

0 posted 2006-05-12 11:57 PM

Flat land and clear sky,
Long road with no Ride,
Hide from the cars that pass you by.

Soft wind and Warm Scent,
Move fast and mean what you meant,
Cross the bridge, but don’t fall in.

Look at the water,
Look at the reflection,
Look at the moon
Look at its perfection.
In life we walk a road
We walk a path
We walk to forget
We walk towards the past
We pace our selves
We race our selves to an end that is on the horizon.
Run till the wind carries your soul and everything ties in.
Run to escape the rising sun
Run to Find Where you are and where you’re from
Run till you are numb

Now walk till you remember
Now fall and whimper
Beat the ground with your open fist
Beat the sound this still exists
BEAT the Chains that bind your wrists

Dream a Dream and peel the skin
FIGHT the ground that has you pinned

Lay on your back watch the sky watch the stars let them die
Let your visual field dissolve and bleed

Archea
Member

since 2006-05-13

Posts 65
United States

1 posted 2006-05-13 03:48 AM

"Lay on your back watch the sky watch the stars let them die"
this is a great line. loved the whole poem though. it transported me to another world, made me think, which is good.

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