Open Poetry #37 |
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Mansion made out of Stone |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
I closed the car door when I loaded my suitcase After leaving a note of good-bye. Soon you'll be learning That I'm never returning, So I want you to understand why. That I signed all the papers My Attorney asked of me So you'd know how It's felt all along. To be so Rejected, Mistreated, Neglected In your mansion made out of stone. As I pulled from the driveway To that long open highway I look back on the way things have been. All your promises broken Yes, so many words spoken That I hope never happens again. Oh, I know you could give more Then I ever could hope for But I'd rather be living alone. Then to be so Rejected, Mistreated, Neglected In your mansion made out of stone. Debo |
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Archea Member
since 2006-05-13
Posts 65United States |
it makes me feel sorry for you... good one |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sounds like it could be turned into a song to me...enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme M |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Debo...Great write, I agree with naked thoughts, it sounds like it could be a song...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
Thanks to each of you for your great replys and yes it is a song I wrote about my Parents Debo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It would be nice if you could do something about the relationship right now, while you're hurting...the pain doesn't just go away because you go away...it takes communication and understanding and forgiveness...James |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
Yes James it sure does take a lot out of a person. I'm slowly starting to understand and forgive. Thanks for the nice replys.... Debo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So achingly sad! I echo James' words and it feels good to hear that you are learning to forgive. Why is it so difficult to get along, I'm sure many will recognise themselves in your strong words. Love, Margherita |
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